Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, rate of inventions are increased dramatically which lead to many changes around people all over the world. It is undeniable the rate of changes is so fast and even people who live in under developing countries can see these changes around themselves and they have to adapt to keep up with them.

It is obvious that people can not overlook these changes and they can not avoid them because they have to deal with all the time. Although some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things, little by little they understand their method of lives is so hard which lead to facing several problems because they can not be able to handle their lives easily if they want to follow their same methods.

Thanks to technological changes, people can spend their lives more comfortable than the past and these changes help them to do their work ten times better than the past which would never happen if they wanted to do same things and restricted to alter. It is clear that the people who are avoiding change might be outraged by the other people because they can not do their work correctly and make problems for the other people.they can not ignore that although they avoid to change, the world never remain stable and change fast.

On the other hand, people can not acclaim that change is always a good thing because there are several evidences that show in some cases, changes lead to some irreversible damage specially when the process of change was so fast and the people could not manage it, in other words, any type of changes that can not be manage correctly cause to several problems. More over, there are several changes that bring bad consequences which people are not aware of and run into problems in the near future as soon as these changes happen.

In conclusion, I think that change is inescapable fact that people whether want to accept it or not, they have to face its consequences which impact on their lives and in some cases the change is not a good things and people must be aware of the change and its results that happen in the future through gathering information about it.

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