Some people say that artists should be financially supported by the governments of their countries. However others believe that there are other choices that can be made. Do you agree or disagree?
People still speak about the art “Mona Lisa” which was originally done in fifteenth century. The reason behind the half-length woman portrait was all about the artist work by Leonardo Da Vinci.This art also made France more popular, as people all over the world, make visits to view this wonderful art work. So, it would be more encouraging for the artist, if they get financial support from the government for various needs.
Making an art is not an easy task as an artist needs to allocate most of their time thinking and put those in art work. Also, it involves traveling to different places...
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Sentence: In conclusion, miniature handmade art work are more valuable and precious and it needs be developed by providing government financial assistance to artists .So in this way, an artist get full financial support and make more arts for our future generation.
Description: The fragment handmade art work is not usually followed by are
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace are with is
Description: A verb, present tense, 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a verb 'to be', infinitive or imperative
Suggestion: Refer to needs and be
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