Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful Do you agree or disagree with this statement

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Some people say that cooking food at home is a waste of time. They claim that good restaurants are better and can make modern living easier and less stressful. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Today because of our busy modern way of life, we all don’t have enough time to spend on cooking as we used to do. Therefore, for many working people, it’s an easy way to eat food in a high level restaurant. In my opinion, in economical and social aspects as well, it could be a beneficial solution. I will discuss about this point of view in my essay.

As far as work concerned, after around 8 hour, we have restriction time to spend on our favorite occupying such as being with family, reading a book, going shopping and so on. On the other hand, eating an healthy and delicious food not only is a necessity for us but it can also chair us up if it is ate with whole family in a lively and warm atmosphere. However, sometimes purchasing components and preparing food might take a considerable time. As an alternative, well known restaurants in which high quality foods are served, will make an opportunity a family to experience excellent moments of being together, without spending a lot of time in the kitchen to prepare the food.

On the other hand opponents argue that restaurant might be unreliable in terms of the quality, freshness of materials and sanitation as well. Furthermore, their products might often be pricy for the majority of people with ordinary earnings. While these arguments would be acceptable, welcoming and going to restaurants may encourage them to raise up their levels an make more healthy food based on their customers taste. Furthermore a completion would be created in the prepared food industry which is resulted more reasonable prices as well as an positive effect on the economy.

To sum up, undoubtedly there are some problems related to eating food out of home. However, regarding to our busy modern life its unavoidable to go the restaurant to eat food. Continuing this social behavior may economically and socially help to improve the current conditions of people, in particular working parents.

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also chair us up
also cheer us up

to raise up their levels an make more healthy food
to raise up their levels and make more healthy food

its unavoidable
it's unavoidable

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