Some people say that government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadium. They should spend more money on medical care and education. Do you agree or disagree?
This issue is highly for debating, which is one of essential part to use much money for developing. Government should provide society in medical and education sectors or theatre and sport sectors. In my opinion both of these sectors should get attention from bureaucrat.
Hospital and school are place which have purpose for increasing human life. Large number of society should get guarantee to acquire treatment when they getting sick. If they are healthy, economic conditon in this country would increase also because they would do their job and produce some product. Moreover, education would support their life to obtain good worker. From education they have ability and mentality to survive in their ofice. Some society are difficult to join in company or build business because they do not have skill to do it. Government should understand these facts and service their inhabitan to get good health and education as high as possible.
On the other hand, theatre and sport are significant fo people. These excercises are basic of human necessity for refreshing when they feel bored with their activity. From theatre viewers not only get art and entertainment but also culture and tradition from their country. Furthermore, sport become one of popular activity in this world which every country has several teams of one kinds of sport. It could become main topic in social media such as television and newspaper and would discuss by society to make close their reltionship.
To sum up, i would like to write that medical care and education are extraordinary for human life but i believe that theatre and sport are an activity which have positive effect and men should do it. Government have to supply these domains.
Sentence: This issue is highly for debating, which is one of essential part to use much money for developing.
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Sentence: Government should understand these facts and service their inhabitan to get good health and education as high as possible.
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that theatre and sport are an activity which have positive effect
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Sentence: If they are healthy, economic conditon in this country would increase also because they would do their job and produce some product.
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Sentence: These excercises are basic of human necessity for refreshing when they feel bored with their activity.
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