Some people say politicians promote the development of society. However, other believe that it is scientists who have more influence on the world. Discuss about views and give your opinion.
Politicians promote the development of society. Many politicians are believed bring the change into the society better than before. But the others say no. Scientist has more gives the change to our life than the politicians.
Politician who learn, think something than give solution problem about all problems in country. So that is way are usually closer to government, such as members of parliament, party and political observer. They are usually make discussion about what happened in our country. For example, a discussion about the rising of electric basic price. Why is there additional price? How people will react to this decision? Is there another alternative if this decision gets hard rejected from people. So we know that politicians give more opinion, suggestion and then make decision to be used in society. The goals of all decisions they made are to give solve problems and then give development in society. But in the facts today, many politicians give argue and made decision only to gain profit for themselves or their group. There are many facts tell us that’s why they work only for themselves development, not for large people. Moreover, there are despite among themselves.
Others people said, that scientist gave more influence to development of society. They give more some advantages to the society than politicians did. For example, they invented an electronic make our daily activity easier than before. They give more the changes into the society and people can feel that directly.
My opinion, because politicians have chance and power to make decision to the society, they have more influence to promote the development of society. But they also can give bad effects to the society if they work only to their profit.
Sentence: Many politicians are believed bring the change into the society better than before.
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Sentence: Politician who learn, think something than give solution problem about all problems in country.
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Suggestion: Refer to than and give
Sentence: Others people said, that scientist gave more influence to development of society.
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Suggestion: Refer to Others and people
Sentence: For example, they invented an electronic make our daily activity easier than before.
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Suggestion: Refer to electronic and make
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