Some people say the relationships we have with our friends are more important than those we have with our family. Others put relationships with family above our friends. Discuss both sides of this argument and give our opinion.
Nowadays, it is often debated that the relation which people have with friends are more important than family. However, some people also place the family relationship under their friends. This essay will discuss both side of views before I give my opinion.
Generally speaking, some people put their family in the first place as family is very important. Some reason is because family always support us by offering wisdom and help. Moreover, they also share their experience. Therefore, we are able to learn from their experience. For example, in family, my grandparents always talk about their li...
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Nowadays, it is often debated that the relation which people have with friends are more important than family.
Suggestion: Can you re-write this sentence?
Some reason is because family always support us by offering wisdom and help.
Some reason is that family always supports us by offering wisdom and help.
One possible reason is because ...
One possible reason is that ...
I think family are more important than friends
I think family is more important than friends
Sentence: All in all, I think family are more important than friends because nowadays it is very difficult to find a truly friend.
Description: A qualifier, pre is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to truly and friend
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.722 21.0
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 15
No. of Words: 301 350
No. of Characters: 1398 1500
No. of Different Words: 152 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.165 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.645 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.251 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 97 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 63 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.722 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.573 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.778 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.345 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.506 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.173 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5