Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to. How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

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Some people say that tourism has many negative effects on the countries that people travel to.
How true is the statement? What can tourists do to reduce the harmful effects of tourism on local cultures and environments?

When holiday season is coming, the growth of tourists will expand the number of the places where they will take for spare time. In the same time, the huge numbers of tourists get ready to pack their luggage. As forgone conclusion, indigenous Inhabitants also serve for supplying their demand for tourism needs; accommodation, place, and food. I think that holiday season is the right time for natives to collect amount of money from visitors, but they can be harmful effects, because tourists’ activity destruct the stabilization of the environment. It is the several evidences; firstly, the tourists’ facilities are the main influences the nature damage. Secondly, the poor of policies is not as controller of voyagers. Lastly, the tourism is an income for government.

Tourists believe that a wonderful view of a country can turn their life into a relaxing time to recover stressful. Tourists prefer to explore the rural area which has spectacular scenery and impressive performance of culture than the modern city. The cultural diversity, for example, could bring new knowledge and influence voyagers to get wisdom which derives from tribal or ethnic. Essentially, the new knowledge is a part of pursuit happiness and relaxes during the holiday. Honestly, the conceptions of the right tourism only appear in the imagination. In the reality, the tourism consideration encourages the native inhabitants to develop new buildings to become the tourism facilities such as hotels, cottages and villas. Consequently, the deforestation becomes primary ways to make tourist’s facilities.

Moreover, tourism areas are poor of policies to keep the nature clean. Visitors who came from cities consider that they do not have to improve the surrounding, because there is no rule to obey, and there is no official penalty for the infraction, so some tourists tend to ignore matter of environment’s impacts. For example, tourists in the beach who littered rubbish will not get any sanctions, but they are free to go anywhere else. It is because government has no attention about the nature.

On the advantage perceptions of tourism, government gets more income which has derived from visitors. The research shows that the growing of tourists has predicted as the one of the financial contribution sources of a country which is possible to build public and health facilities; hospitals, roads and highways.

In conclusion, the increasing of tourists, tourists seem as an impact of the nature problems, but tourists also expand as an income in the same occasion. I think that government as the primary authority enable to solve the unbalance of nature which has derived from negative impact of tourism.

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