Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prisons while other claim they should be made to work in communities, discuss both and give your own opinion.

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Some people think lawbreakers should be sent to prisons while other claim they should be made to work in communities, discuss both and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, many people argue that lawbreakers should go to the jail. However, their problems, which can be tolerant by other should get other punishment than is send to the jail. In this essay I will explain the reasons why people think convicts should send to prison and why convicts can do community service.

Many people believe offender such like thieves, fraud and other lawbreakers are potential treat for the safety. Lawbreakers are not same with other criminal like robbers and killers. That is why we should patient to choice the right punishment for them because we can not think balancing between frauds and killers. For example, killers really should have been prisoned by polices but it is different for fraud that is better to do communities punishments because what they do probably can still being forgiven by the citizens. Lawbreakers can become really useful in their local communities. Actually we need to avoid lawbreakers to get the negative influence the prison can have.

Frequent people think community service is not a sufficient punishment that will not affect to the lawbreakers and they will not fell pressure from the problem that they have made for the communities. Many people believe too that the offenders should be locked up and away from their victims. For example, offenders who just get communities service will fell like they do not have any sins because after they do communities service the will fell freedom again.

In conclusion , as I have read in that opinion which we better punish offenders as hard as possibly so they will not think to do their latest crime.

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Sentence: However, their problems, which can be tolerant by other should get other punishment than is send to the jail.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and send

Sentence: That is why we should patient to choice the right punishment for them because we can not think balancing between frauds and killers.
Description: A modal auxillary is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to should and patient

Sentence: Frequent people think community service is not a sufficient punishment that will not affect to the lawbreakers and they will not fell pressure from the problem that they have made for the communities.
Description: The word fell is not usually used as a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to fell. do you mean 'feel'?

Sentence: In conclusion , as I have read in that opinion which we better punish offenders as hard as possibly so they will not think to do their latest crime.
Description: The fragment better punish offenders is rare

Sentence: For example, killers really should have been prisoned by polices but it is different for fraud that is better to do communities punishments because what they do probably can still being forgiven by the citizens.
Error: prisoned Suggestion: No alternate word

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No. of Different Words: 130 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.046 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.899 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 20.615 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 8.176 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.38 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.169 0.07
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