Some people think that parent should teaches children how to be good member of society.Other,however believe that school is a place to learn this.discuss the views and give your opinion
Human beings are depended to each other and they live in a society,where a group of people follows same culture,religion,custom etc.So its necessary for every individual in society to be god to each other for peaceful life. And i believe that parent should teach children how to be a good member in a society.
We consider parent as the 1st teacher,and the child being more in contact and intimate with their parent they will learn more easily,effortlessly,and naturally from them.The child are like a piece of clay where their parent can moult them and give them shape they want from their own child.The child reflect the image of their parent in a society,how he talk,how he eat,how he walk etc All this things are common but act a major role in the judgement of ones own personality in a society.So this common day to day life routine are taught by the parents.
Most of the juvenile delinquency cases like robbery,rape case,gang fight etc where the child with orphan,semi orphan, divorcee parent are seen as a child fail to know right and wrong thing as they were not taught and aware of it.
Though we can learn some from our teacher in school how to act according to lead a life in society,but it would not be effective as parents and it is not comparable.The teach has to handle whole children in her class but a parents is easy to handle her only child.The parent want to see their child well educated,well mannered,in a society so the people around them feel good to have their children around.
In conclusion,children will get the full version and image of their parents.so if they adjust,adapt and cope well with the society which mean that their older member was same.So its responsibility of the parent to teach their children.
Sentence: Human beings are depended to each other and they live in a society,where a group of people follows same culture,religion,custom etc.So its necessary for every individual in society to be god to each other for peaceful life.
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Sentence: We consider parent as the 1st teacher,and the child being more in contact and intimate with their parent they will learn more easily,effortlessly,and naturally from them.The child are like a piece of clay where their parent can moult them and give them shape they want from their own child.The child reflect the image of their parent in a society,how he talk,how he eat,how he walk etc All this things are common but act a major role in the judgement of ones own personality in a society.So this
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Sentence: common day to day life routine are taught by the parents.
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