Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good member of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is generally accepted that social life education can be taught is the school which is designed to shape the children to be valuable part of the community. However, the parents roles should not be omitted because they also have responsibilties to do so.
To be good personal in the society, firstly, children should be formally educated. In the school, they will learn a lot about human morality that classifies whether a good or bad behavior. Moreover, they also learn about laws which is acknowledge them about some regulations in social life and punishments if they break the rules and it would hugely benefit for their future as the member of society. Secondly, being in the school is a transition for the children phase before they jump in in real and larger community. When children involve in formal education system, they should deal with new environment and people which is also occur in social life.
However, the roles of parents in teaching their children to have proper ability in community is also essential. In fact, children spend more time in their home than school, its mean parental education more influence than formal education. Next, children own such a high tendency of imitating their parents behavior in daily life as well as in the community. Consequently, either father or mother should be a good role model to their kids and try to avoid kind of bad behavior in front of them.
In summary, to be a valuable member of society, children should be educated either formal or informal ways, indeed, both parents and teachers collaboration plays enormous roles in creating high quality children for community.
social life education can be taught is the school
social life education can be taught in the school
To be good personal in the society,
To be a good person in the society,
the roles of parents in teaching their children to have proper ability in community is also essential.
the roles of parents ... are also essential.
children spend more time in their home than school
children spend more time in their home than that in school
Sentence: Moreover, they also learn about laws which is acknowledge them about some regulations in social life and punishments if they break the rules and it would hugely benefit for their future as the member of society.
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new environment and people which is also occur in social life.
new environment and people which also occur in social life.
Sentence: However, the parents roles should not be omitted because they also have responsibilties to do so.
Error: responsibilties Suggestion: responsibilities
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