Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society . Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this,

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society . Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this,

It is a common phenomenon and indisputable fact that a human being should acquire knowledge not only in academic sphere, but also in social sphere. It is popularly believed that social skills should be taught to children by their parents, however some people argue that school has to provide student with these skills. While I tend towards the viewpoint that children can learn to be good members of society at school.

On the one hand, parents are excellent teachers and guides in human life. They are always with their children in every good and bad moments.Parents are closer to their children which provides more comfort to children in the learning process. There is no precise evidence to refute that fact that basic skills of sociability are taught by parents, taking into consideration this fact, it is easier for adults to proceed their development in terms of social skills.

On the other hand, individual can obtain great social experience at school. While one communicates with his peers and acquitances , the level of communicating proficiency will soar dramatically. Due to the fact that there are diverse sort of characters of his friend, on this occasion, child will be involded, get more information about social skills and he tries to adapt to these conditions. As a consequent, humankind becomes more sociable and good member of society. In addition, individual commence to make new friends and to build up new relationships at school which effects positively to their confidence.

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Sentence: While one communicates with his peers and acquitances , the level of communicating proficiency will soar dramatically.
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Sentence: Due to the fact that there are diverse sort of characters of his friend, on this occasion, child will be involded, get more information about social skills and he tries to adapt to these conditions.
Error: involded Suggestion: involved

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Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
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Minimum 250 words wanted.

better to have 5 paragraphs:

para 1: introduction.
para 2: reason 1
para 3: reason 2
para 4: reason 3 (optional)
para 5: conclusion

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No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 246 350
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
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Sentence Length SD: 8.563 7.5
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Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.351 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.525 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.047 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 5