Someone in your company is organizing a trip abroad for language learning training. Write a letter to him/her and say why he/she should choose you for this trip, as there is limited number of places available.
- Describe who you are.
- Why do you think this trip is good for you?
- How can it help the company?
Dear Sir/ Madam,
I am writing in regard to vacancy place in the incoming trip abroad that you are in charge of.
My name is Sarah X. Last day, I saw an advertisement on our company's website about an especially learning French language that will be held in France next month. Everybody who meets essential requirements can apply for this course. I am 25 years old and I take several French courses during these years and I can speak and write, however I am not totally influence.
I think this trip can help me to improve my language skill. Moreover, next month, France is host for the next computer exhibition and we can participate in this event too and show our new products. This trip can help us to meanwhile we learn French, find new customers and increase our incoming.
I believe I am full eligible and I want recommending myself to take a part in this course. I would like to have the opportunity to talk to you further about my request. I am available and can be contacted via my email xx@hh.com or call me on 645454.
Thank you for your time and consideration.
Yours faithfully,
M. Min.
about an especially learning French language
about learning French language
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Category: Good Excellent
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