A successful person is one who has earned a lot of money.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every person has to face various ups and downs in his/her life. In a person's life there might be many situations where times have turned out unexpectedly harsh against him. He might also face circumstances where everything seems wrong. At this point of time many people give up as they cannot face such difficulties.
There are a very few who do not end the fight but stand up to their challenges to emerge victorious. They are the achievers. These achievers then become successful in their respective fields. They do not drop their weapons and accept defeat. Instead they fight back...
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