The Table and the Bar chart below give information about travelling to work in Houston, Texas.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The charts I want to describe are two. First chart is about how many percentages of people using the some kinds of trasportations. Second chart is about Co2 Emissions from different forms of transports in Houston, Texas. Both of them are connected.
According to the first chart, the travelers who use car alone or without passanger the amount is 11 percent. Morover, The Travelers who use train or bus the amount is 37 percent. The least amount which is 4 percent is placed by traveler who cycle or walk.
Still according to the first chart, The other measurement comes from the age that the most oldest traveler which is 47 years old using train or bus. The second which is 44 years old is placed by travelers that use shared car. The third one which is 43 is placed by the travellers who use car without passanger. The last as the youngest which is 39 years old is placed by travellers who use cycle or walk.
According to the second chart about some kinds of the transportations which spend Co2 emmisions to the air, The highest one comes from the car which is driven alone that almost 0.35 kilogram per person per kilometer. The shared cars spend almost 0.1 kilogram per person per kilometer. Buses or trains spend around 0 until 0.05 kilogram per person per kilometer. The last were Cycling and walking that spend nothing for Co2 emmisions.
If we compare of both charts which are related for one and another shows that people who use car alone or without passanger which is the highest rank contributes the highest Co2 emmisions to the air.
Based on the explanation for two charts above, we can conclude that using car alone or without passanger causes increasing of Co2 emmisions to the air around Houston Texas.
Sentence: First chart is about how many percentages of people using the some kinds of trasportations.
Error: trasportations Suggestion: transportation
Sentence: According to the first chart, the travelers who use car alone or without passanger the amount is 11 percent.
Error: passanger Suggestion: passenger
entence: The third one which is 43 is placed by the travellers who use car without passanger.
Error: passanger Suggestion: passenger
Sentence: According to the second chart about some kinds of the transportations which spend Co2 emmisions to the air, The highest one comes from the car which is driven alone that almost 0.35 kilogram per person per kilometer.
Error: emmisions Suggestion: emission
Sentence: Buses or trains spend around 0 until 0.05 kilogram per person per kilometer.
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Sentence: The last were Cycling and walking that spend nothing for Co2 emmisions.
Error: emmisions Suggestion: emission
Sentence: If we compare of both charts which are related for one and another shows that people who use car alone or without passanger which is the highest rank contributes the highest Co2 emmisions to the air.
Error: emmisions Suggestion: emission
Error: passanger Suggestion: passenger
Sentence: Based on the explanation for two charts above, we can conclude that using car alone or without passanger causes increasing of Co2 emmisions to the air around Houston Texas.
Error: emmisions Suggestion: emission
Error: passanger Suggestion: passenger
If we compare of both charts which are related for one and another shows that people who use car alone or without passanger which is the highest rank contributes the highest Co2 emmisions to the air.
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