The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparison where relevant.
The table demostrates percentage of items which consumer spends money on. There are differences between 5 countries for spending money on various categories.
Approximetly 28. 91 per cent of national consumers in Ireland spent money on food, drinks or tobacco, however, this percentage in Italy was 16. 36 in 2002. Nearly 2 per cent more buyers in Sweden spent more than consumers in Spain, however, 15. 77 per cent bought food, drinks or tobacco. Survey emphasises that 2 times more purchaser in Turkey spent on these items. Consumers who spending on clothing and footwear are the same, rough...
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Sentence: Consumers who spending on clothing and footwear are the same, roughly 6.
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Suggestion: Refer to who and spending
Sentence: Purchasers who spent money on leisure and education were equally, presumably 3.
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Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace equally with adjective
Sentence: The table demostrates percentage of items which consumer spends money on.
Error: demostrates Suggestion: demonstrates
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