The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries Beer Country Amount 1 Ireland 155 litres 2 Germany 119 litres 3 Austria 106 litres 4 Belgium 98 litres 5 Denmark 98 litres 6 Uni

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The tables below give information about the amount of beer and fruit juice consumed per person per year in different countries.
Beer
Country Amount*
1 Ireland 155 litres
2 Germany 119 litres
3 Austria 106 litres
4 Belgium 98 litres
5 Denmark 98 litres
6 United Kingdom 97 litres
7 Australia 89 litres
8 United States 85 litres
9 Netherlands 80 litres
10 Finland 79 litres
Fruit juice
Country Amount*
1 Canada 52.6 litres
2 United States 42.8 litres
3 Germany 38.6 litres
4 Austria 37.3 litres
5 Sweden 35.5 litres
6 Australia 34.4 litres
7 Finland 33 litres
8 United Kingdom 29.3 litres
9 Netherlands 28.1 litres
10 New Zealand 24.8 litres

The tables give average amounts of beer and fruit juice drunk by one person each year in different countries of the world. Overall, it can be clearly observed that the amount of beer consumed practically overweighs fruit juice consumption in all given countries.

The most obvious privilege in the amount of beer consumed can be observed in Ireland, 155 litres per person. As for Australia and Germany, where the beer consumption is slightly less than in Ireland, the figures are given as 119 and 106 litres respectively. The other noticeable fact is that almost each person in Belgium drinks as much quantity of beer as each Danish citizen, id est 98 litres per year. The remaining 5 countries can be determined as the most skimpy beer drinkers, who's figures are just under 97 litres per year.

Regarding the fruit juice consumption, which has comparatively lower numbers, Canada's and the United States' national consumes nearly 53 and 43 litres of juice respectively. Next comes Germany and Austria with the figures of approximately 37-38 litres, which can be noted as the average margin among all other countries. On the other hand, the amount of fruit juice consumed by a person in New Zealand is only 24.8 litres, which is relatively the lowest quantity in this table. This ends my report.

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