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The bar chart reveals main purposes for study among students in different age groups. It is clear from the chart that there is a gradual decrease in studying for career reasons with age. About 80% of students who are under 26 years old conduct their education to fulfill their career objectives. This figure declines steadily over the next three decades and only just under 20% of over 49 years old students carry out their studies for career reasons.

Conversely, the percentage of students who do studies because of their interest in subjects increase as they getting matured. In fact this figure...

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Score: 8.0 out of 9
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