televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.are these show a good method of finding talented people or they just entertainment?

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televised talent shows have become popular in many societies today.
are these show a good method of finding talented people or they just entertainment?

Today’s world entertainment has become one of many jobs that is popular among people. People always enjoy to watching entertainment from their television. The question is whether television entertainer has a good real talent or they only can entertain spectator.

Most of people look this job as their work. It is due to the fact that today television talent is earning much money. This day, without a real talent, they easily enter to entertainment world which only can make spectator fun, lough, and happy. For example, television program provide the unique program such as a bee between two entertainers in the gamble quiz. They might only answer the question “yes or no” or sometimes give funny expression to entertain people. Because of this program, manager of entertainment industry will might interest and hire them, although they cannot sing.

Moreover, the way for looking talent is not that anymore, people can do anything else such as using internet application, you tube, to make people know how their brilliant skill. They often upload their action of singing, acting, or other talent to persuade audiences.

Those methods are different as the entertainer in the past. They need hard working to reach label of “television entertainer”. They have to follow any audition, rules, and others. They have to spend much money and no care what will happen in the next to get that label. It hardly belief, although they might not get it, they always work hard for becoming an actress.

To put in a nutshell, becoming a famous person is people’s willing, otherwise not all of us will. It is because today television is one of household’s equipment that needed. Television is also one of many methods to find the talented skill. However, for getting it, sometimes people too have hard times. It is not really easy as people thought. They occasionally need much money, a real talented skill, or having a brilliant idea to make people fun, but the people who has hard time of their effort is always long live in television industry.

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Sentence: For example, television program provide the unique program such as a bee between two entertainers in the gamble quiz.
Description: The fragment program provide the is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace provide with verb, past tense

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