Today's children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The development of society in today's world has many effects on fathers, mothers and the ways to educate their children. Therefore, I believe that today's children are always put under pressure than children in previous generations.
It is evidenced that there are more and more competitive in modern society. So that most of parents thought that getting the prestigous bachelor's degree is the best future of their children. This is why the children are forced to learn more and more at younger ages. They are required to attend many courses such as drawing, swimming, instrumental classes and so...
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Sentence: So that most of parents thought that getting the prestigous bachelor's degree is the best future of their children.
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