The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given are the maps that illustrate the development of the certain area as a result of built facilities to attract tourists.
To begin with, the first map shows that before the constructions given area was a 250m long island which was almost empty except for some trees. There was a beach on the west of the isle too.
Moving on the second map, it is possible to see that the island has been fundamentally different from its previous sight as there are a lot of houses on it. In addition to these accommodation units, tourism facilities such as a restaurant, a reception and a pier have been established, even the beach has been opened to tourists longing for swimming. As the means of transportation, the emergence of a vehicle track that links reception to the restaurant and the pier and the footpaths which relates houses to each other and the beach seem to be remarkable developments.
To sum it up, all these changes which are mentioned above have turned this island into an appropriate place for tourism.
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