Unemployment rate

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Unemployment rate

Submitted by shirin on Mon, 12/09/2013 - 16:15

The table below shows the percentage of unemployed men and women in 5 distinctive countries in 2000.

It can be seen that there were considerable diversities among the rates of females' unemployments. The majority of women in Morocco didn't have any jobs(27.6%). That was the most jobless female percentage in compare with other countries. The second high rate of women joblessness was for Belize with about 20.3 percent. Although Australia and Japan had respectively 6.5 and 4.5 percent of people without offecial income, Netherland was shown as the least level of unemployments by 4.2 percent.

According to the chart, males in Netherland had the most job opportunities which means only 2.6 percent of them weren't employments.The percentage of Moroccan men who were unemployment, was 20.3 which was the highest percent of this problem. Belize, Australia and Japan were been the avarage of profession percentage with 8.9, 6.7 and 4.9.

In conclusion, the first placement of joblessness was confered to Morraco for both sexes with approximately 22 percent however the least percentage of unemployment rate of men and women was for Netherland with 3.3. These comparisons were exactly like males and females in the same country.

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That was the most jobless female percentage in compare with other countries.
That was the most jobless female percentage in comparison with other countries.

The percentage of Moroccan men who were unemployment
The percentage of Moroccan men who were in unemployment

Belize, Australia and Japan were been the avarage of profession percentage with 8.9, 6.7 and 4.9.
Belize, Australia and Japan have the average of profession percentage with 8.9, 6.7 and 4.9.

Sentence: Although Australia and Japan had respectively 6.5 and 4.5 percent of people without offecial income, Netherland was shown as the least level of unemployments by 4.2 percent.
Error: offecial Suggestion: official

Sentence: Belize, Australia and Japan were been the avarage of profession percentage with 8.9, 6.7 and 4.9.
Error: avarage Suggestion: average

Sentence: In conclusion, the first placement of joblessness was confered to Morraco for both sexes with approximately 22 percent however the least percentage of unemployment rate of men and women was for Netherland with 3.3.
Error: confered Suggestion: conferred

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