Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the 21st century, racism disappears from some countries in the world. Gender is not a problem when people want to study in University. In Indonesia long time ago women were difficult to study in all levels of general education. The reason is women worse human than men. Politics appeared in there era to help women and reduce racism of women. RA Kartini is a patriot who helps all women in Indonesia can study without differences. Male and female have same position which get education in each subject, because of that University should appreciate people who have any eager to study. However, some subjects sometimes appropriate for male or female only. This essay would explain about accepting number of male and female students in every subject.

Long time ago, major of culinary was identical with women. Nowadays, in reality many men have a job as chef in the well known restaurant and they took culinary subject in University. Rudy harudin is the well known male chef in Indonesia, but he had bad experience in the University. When he attended in University which culinary major tend to accept women students, because the reason is woman who has natural ability to cook, but talent is not recognizing a gender.

Recently, most of dentists in Indonesia are women. Because of that, in the rural areas only fewer dentist who become volunteer for establishing a clinic to help poor people. Most of dentists are women, so they prefer to get a job in the big city than in the rural area. Based on the reality University should make balance between female and male students who want to study of dentist.

However, sometimes in a special subject University has to selective to take student base on gender. For example, electrical and networking subjects available for male students. Because both of subjects have to practice how to establish a networking in a building and need more power. Although female has opportunity to join in these subjects, but most of students in electrical and networking subjects are men.

In conclusion, I believe that each subject has criteria for accepting students. However, every student also has opportunity to join in all subjects. The important is students who realize what will do since study in this subject.

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The reason is women worse human than men.
The reason is that women are worse human than men.

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