Warning: Cigarette kills people

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Warning: Cigarette kills people

Warning: Cigarette kills people

Nowadays, cigarette smoking is becoming more serious social problem which is being faced by the public because of the negative impact, even though smoking gives some advantages for the smokers, but it has more disadvantages.

The harmful effect of smoking reflects to the health risk, which causes death. Many people die because of the decease which is caused by cigarette smoking such as lung cancer, heart decease, high blood pressure, mouth cancer, and tooth lost.

The risk of cigarette smoking is not only infected by the smokers but also the people around them like children with parents smoking, second-hand smoke and passive smokers. People smoke with different reasons, for example: young people smoke because they, who watch parents and friends smoking, want to be cool-looking and feel grown up. Again, the influence from movie stars and celebrities could be the next reasons.

Cigarette contains thousands of chemical substance, such as tar and nicotine, which cause lung cancer. Inhaling nicotine, which enters into human body, goes to the brain. Then it travels to the lung in which stays to be a dangerous illness, namely cancer. This is very harmful for the human body. Therefore, taking prevention action is very useful, such as trying not to smoke. Once smoked, it would be difficult for you to get away from the influence of the addicted substance in the cigarette.

Quitting from smoking is the best solution for the smokers, but it requires high self-motivation, special treatment, such as counseling and medical therapy. As a result, it could reduce disease, people feel better, enjoy everyday activities, and own self-esteem.

In a nutshell, avoiding and quitting from the cigarette smoking would bring more benefits to the life of human being, not only to the users but also to the people around them.

Written by uncle Sam

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No. of Different Words: 159 200
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