What are the causes of road accidents ? How can we over come this?i
In modren era road accidents are increasing day by day that is very dangerous. Transport play a paramount role in human life which helps to and fro. some people driving time attend the phone they do not follow the rules here; i would like to establish my views on road accident.
To begin with ; first and fore most illiterate masses do not follow the rule which are made by goverment . More over; now a day big cities lke chandigarh ; patiala; as well as delhi every big cities have a huge traffic . Their cities having a traffic lights; fixed cameras as well as traffic police but they illiterate people do not follow the rule. They people give fine to police. Masses in rate race to more and more achive . They never follow the rules . That are the big causes of road accidents.
Further emphasing my point of view ; young people watch the television. They see moter cycle as well as cars stunts and young people copy that stunts on roads. Next? In our country roads are not good for driving. On road over their speed instruction are also available like four way roads 80 speed; two way roads 60 speed as well as one way roads 40 speed but people do what ever they want to do that is a grand causes of accidents.
In addition ; they do not have driving liecence they people also use every vechile . Some children who have studies in school that children miner but they use all types of vehicles that are tha big causes of accidents .
To encapsulate; as per my above dissicusion government and people should do combined efforts to reduce this problem . People should do follow the rules as well as all types of instruction to over come the menace problem.
Sentence: Transport play a paramount role in human life which helps to and fro. some people driving time attend the phone they do not follow the rules here; i would like to establish my views on road accident.
Description: The fragment Transport play a is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace play with verb, past tense
Sentence: More over; now a day big cities lke chandigarh ; patiala; as well as delhi every big cities have a huge traffic .
Suggestion: More over,nowadays big cities like Chandigarh,Patiala,Delhi have a huge traffic.
Sentence: They see moter cycle as well as cars stunts and young people copy that stunts on roads.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to cars and stunts
Sentence: In addition ; they do not have driving liecence they people also use every vechile .
Description: A pronoun, personal, nominative, not 3rd person singular is not usually followed by a noun, plural, common
Suggestion: Refer to they and people
Sentence: In modren era road accidents are increasing day by day that is very dangerous.
Error: modren Suggestion: modern
Sentence: To begin with ; first and fore most illiterate masses do not follow the rule which are made by goverment .
Error: goverment Suggestion: government
Sentence: More over; now a day big cities lke chandigarh ; patiala; as well as delhi every big cities have a huge traffic .
Error: lke Suggestion: like
Sentence: Masses in rate race to more and more achive .
Error: achive Suggestion: active
Sentence: Further emphasing my point of view ; young people watch the television.
Error: emphasing Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: In addition ; they do not have driving liecence they people also use every vechile .
Error: vechile Suggestion: vehicle
Error: liecence Suggestion: license
Sentence: To encapsulate; as per my above dissicusion government and people should do combined efforts to reduce this problem .
Error: dissicusion Suggestion: discussion
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Category: Satisfactory Excellent
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No. of Words: 298 350
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No. of Different Words: 156 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.155 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.419 4.6
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Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.556 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.563 7.5
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Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.528 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.069 0.07
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