What are the changes the conventional family lifestyle has undergone in recent years?
In early days, human life was very hard. they spend their life in caves,wrap animal skin and tree leaves over their body and hunt animals for food but these changes in early human's life had taken a very long time.
The life was changed when the human started to fertilize the crops. Farming meant that people did not need to travel to find food. Instead they began to live in settled communities and grew crops or raised animals on nearby land. The agriculture totally changed the human life. They were independent during that time. They built stronger, permanent homes and surrounded their settlements with walls to protect themselves.
Firstly, the trend of joint family were in process.This is a type of extended family composed of parents ,their children a one household. But during the education the joint families are built up in to nuclear families. Because now a days everyone want to be educated and independent . The privacy which is meant for couple was not their in joint families. Sometimes the problem of discrimination is raised between the children of the family. According to there situations the trend of nuclear family that includes father mother and children compare to extended family. There is a specific sense of freedom that gives a nuclear family the ability to live life as they wish. Is is also easier to avoid stress. That's why everyone mostly preferred nuclear family according to the life style.
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