When visiting foreign countries, visitors should take full advantage of learning the culture and traditions of that country. How can they learn about the culture and traditions? Why do some visitors strive to learn about cutler and traditions while others

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When visiting foreign countries, visitors should take full advantage of learning the culture and traditions of that country. How can they learn about the culture and traditions? Why do some visitors strive to learn about cutler and traditions while others are not interested at all?

Peoples are vesting foreign countries for several reasons, such as learning about these countries and for many other reasons, it is the custom to have knowledge about any foreign countries before visiting it and know how to deal with peoples in that countries from different sources for example, books and news or magazines.

Over all, peoples can learn about the culture and traditions by using every source they can have from reading specific books which concern on the cultures and traditions of these countries, in addition to that using network to search about it is more help full because they can see all pictures and videos that give them the hall image that they are looking for. Therefore, it is very important to fallow up all the news about these countries before going there. Also peoples can go to travel offices and asked for booklets that have summary about any country.

Before any one decide to travel to any foreign country they have to know how they can live and survive their and where to go, how they can enjoys time and how they can manage with this country peoples because of that many visitors strive to learn about culture and traditions.

On another hand some peoples just want to have adventure and discover country’s these peoples don’t care about learning about these countries and have on interest about it.

In conclude, I believe that learning about foreign countries before visiting it is very interesting and gives the right way in how to spend happy time in the save side and help in contact with the peoples there, but I also respect other opinions on not to learn about these country because every one know what they want.

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Sentence: Before any one decide to travel to any foreign country they have to know how they can live and survive their and where to go, how they can enjoys time and how they can manage with this country peoples because of that many visitors strive to learn about culture and traditions.
Description: A numeral, cardinal is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to one and decide
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Suggestion: Refer to can and enjoys

Sentence: In conclude, I believe that learning about foreign countries before visiting it is very interesting and gives the right way in how to spend happy time in the save side and help in contact with the peoples there, but I also respect other opinions on not to learn about these country because every one know what they want.
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