Why Do You Think People Attend College or University?

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Why Do You Think People Attend College or University?

Education is one of important things in this world, and everybody has to get that one. Because there are many benefits that we can take from education. Education can make us become a smart people. If we became a smart people, we can change our life in order to be better. We can take education in several places that are school, course, university, and the rest. In my opinion, every people that attend to the university have one destiny that is for increasing their knowledge. In the following paragraphs I will try to support my answer with some reasons and examples.

Firstly, after we attach our obligatory education in Elementary, Junior High School, and Senior High School, there is one more education that we can take, college. In University, we can learn more specific lesson than in school. So, we can get more knowledge that we love. There are many facilities that University gave to support our education. Thus, if we waste our time, we will be sorry for doing that.

Secondly, every people in the world certainly want to get a job, and for supporting that, they should take the lesson in University appropriate with what are they want to be. For example, if they interest to be a doctor, they should take course of doctor. Thus, they can obtain a deep understanding of doctor knowledge. Moreover, they should spend a lot of time and money. It is not really important for them.

Thirdly, in University, we can get a new experience. Not only experience in lesson, but also in society. So we can increase our knowledge in every sector in our life. Then we can influence in mayor that we are interesting and we can become to a professional in our job.

To sum up, we as a person who believed that education is important to our live is surely have a reason why we are attending to University, and the answer is for increasing our knowledge.

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