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Write a letter to a company manager to apply for a part-time job. Please say-Why do you want this particular job?- Why are you suitable for this position?- When are you available to start work?


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Write a letter to a company manager to apply for a part-time job. Please say
-Why do you want this particular job?
- Why are you suitable for this position?
- When are you available to start work?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to apply for the position of part time business analyst in your IT Company.

As you can see from my CV, currently I am studying Masters in Information technology, major in business analysis in Central Queensland University. I am extremely interested in this position as I really want to work with highly experienced people and in one of the global leading companies such as yours. Moreover, I have previous experience as business analyst of a short period of time.

I have pleasant personality, good communication skill and hardworking ability. Besides, I am good and quick learner. I strongly believe that I am perfectly suitable for that position due to have relevant educational background and experience.

At the moment, I am unemployed and there is semester break going on the university. Apparently, I am able to join in your company any time at your convenience. I am looking forward to discuss my credentials with you personally.

Thanks for your time and consideration.

Your faithfully

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No. of Words: 158 200 (put more words if possible)

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 9
No. of Words: 158 200
No. of Characters: 773 900
No. of Different Words: 100 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.545 3.7
Average Word Length: 4.892 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.062 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 59 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 53 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 38 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 23 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.946 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.4 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.467 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.681 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.184 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4