Write a letter to your friend and ask to take care of your children while you are away on a business trip overseas. In your letter include
- What their likes and dislikes in food are.
- What activities they like the most.
- Suggest an arrangement for you to pick them up after the trip.
Dear Mina,
First of all, I should thank you for keeping my children. So I have some advice for you that don’t confuse about your job. Ali is picky eater. He is early bird too. I want you ready breakfast at 6:30 AM for him. He like milk with honثy at morning and strawberry jam too. In other meals he always eat vegetables with rice or meat. But Baran wake up late and she like all of foods. You can make every food that you think is useful for her. But she is depend in me a little more and maybe she bother you and make excuses when I don’t be there. Finally I should say that both of them like mushroom soap with milk.
Ali go to swimming on Monday and Thursday. He like computer game too. Therefore he can play every day but not more than one hour.
I have a small garden in backyard. Baran like flowers and plants. Totally he like garden. She can play at garden and you look after her pleas.
I don’t know how much last my trip. Pleas be in touch with me and talk about my children. After my trip I want see them in airport because I have to go work immediately.
I hope see you soon
Sentence: He like milk with hon?y at morning and strawberry jam too.
Description: The fragment He like milk is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace like with verb, past tense
Sentence: But Baran wake up late and she like all of foods.
Description: The fragment Baran wake up is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace wake with verb, past tense
Description: The fragment she like all is rare
Sentence: But she is depend in me a little more and maybe she bother you and make excuses when I don't be there.
Description: The token is is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to is and depend
Description: The fragment she bother you is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace bother with verb, past tense
Sentence: Ali go to swimming on Monday and Thursday.
Description: The fragment Ali go to is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace go with verb, past tense
Sentence: He like computer game too.
Description: The fragment He like computer is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace like with verb, past tense
Sentence: Totally he like garden.
Description: The fragment he like garden is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace like with verb, past tense
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.393 7.5
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
Same grammar issue.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 5.5 out of 9
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 21 10
No. of Words: 214 200
No. of Characters: 817 1000
No. of Different Words: 129 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.825 4.0
Average Word Length: 3.818 4.6
Word Length SD: 1.904 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 34 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 21 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 12 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 5 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 10.19 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 4.393 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.333 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.307 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.471 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.191 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4