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The chart below illustrates the sum count of minutes made phone in Britain, separated into three categories from 1995 to 2002.

The first thing that catches the eye is correlation of Local, National/international and mobile calls. The local calls by fixed line were about 90 billion minutes and it was the absolute maximum, meanwhile the highest point of National and International calls from 2001 to 2001 contained under 70 billion minutes. Whereas in 2002 the amount of minutes taken by mobile phone was nearly half of 100 billion.

According to the chart amount of local calls slightly increased by 20 points from 70 billion from 1995 to 1999. At the beginning of the XXI st century it decreased to the less than 80 billion. However the duration of National and International calls constantly went up from nearly 40 to almost half billion minutes. Starting by 1995 and following 12 years mobile calls were significantly increased to nearly half.

To sum up starting by 1995 to 2002 the correlation of all types of calls stayed the same. The amount of minutes of National and International calls were less than amount of Local calls time, but still higher than mobiles’

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The chart below illustrates the sum count of minutes made phone in Britain,
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 10 10
No. of Words: 199 200
No. of Characters: 956 1000
No. of Different Words: 98 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.756 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.804 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.588 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 62 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 48 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 28 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.9 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.485 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.5 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.46 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.658 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.11 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4