Writing Task 1 The two maps below show an island before and after construction of some tourist facilities Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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Writing Task 1. The two maps below show an island, before and after construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selectiong and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The picture shows two maps of an island, one is before the construction and then second after established some tourist facilities.

Overall, the development of this island happened dramatically. It was just a virgin island without any transportation and accommodation. Then it became a tourist destination with plenty of facilities.

On the southern of island, there is a harbor. It is the only access to this island by water transportation. About 600 meters away to West side, there is a beach that now use for swimming. This is also the main tourism spot. To go to this place, you have to go through the vehicle track from harbor. You then reach reception office which is surrounded by vehicle path. After that, you continue to your left hand side, you need to take a walk on the footpath before you finally arrive.

For accommodation, there are now bungalows on the east side of the island and in between beach and reception office. On the north side, there is a restaurant available.

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