You and your friend had dinner at an expensive restaurant last night. The waiter was incompetent, and the food was not good. Write your disappointment about those describing what happened.

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You and your friend had dinner at an expensive restaurant last night. The waiter was incompetent, and the food was not good. Write your disappointment about those describing what happened.

Submitted by adam on Tue, 05/21/2013 - 23:39

Having dinner with your manager must be an expected moment, so am I. Since I am a new employee in Exxon Mobile Ltd, to have dinner with my user is a valuable chance. I could show him another side of me. To discuss something informal is also a good topic during the occasion. We could talk about family, hobby, and the other interesting stuffs. Being planned for three weeks, finally my new boss approved my invitation to eat dinner at Rolex Restaurant. The restaurant is in the downtown of Jogjakarta. I wore my best new casual dress for the dinner. Unfortunately my dinner moment with my new manager...

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Avg. Sentence Length: 10.8 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.461 7.5

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Hi There,
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