You are advised to spend a maximum of 20 minutes on this task.The graph below gives information on wages of Indonesia over a ten-year period. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.You should write at least 150 words.

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You are advised to spend a maximum of 20 minutes on this task.
The graph below gives information on wages of Indonesia over a ten-year period. Write a report for a university tutor describing the information shown.
You should write at least 150 words.

The line graph illustrates the growth rate in wages in Indonesia for 10 years, from 1993 to 2003.

The growth started at two percent in 1993 and doubled at four percent in the next year. Nevertheless, after had a sharp increase, the growth dropped for two years, it declined to a lower level at three percent, but, it was not lower as the first recorded data. The growth was starting increased slightly again in 1997 at just under 4 percent. 1998 had the best growth over the decade when the wages peaked at six percent.

Nonetheless, after the peak period in 1998, the wages decreased nearly rest of year. Only a year after, the percentage dramatically dropped to under three percent, and stayed for a year. Then, the wages gradually dipped from approximately two percent in 2001 and landed the lowest point over the year at one percent growth. Fortunately, the growth climbed again in 2003 at less than two percent.

In conclusion, the growth wages in Indonesia has illustrated some fluctuations through the 10 years.

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