You are a student who wants to apply to Green Pines College. You are experiencing financial problems at the moment. Write a letter to the Principal of the College explaining your situation and ask for information on scholarships or other means of financial help available.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to ask for information about student scholarship available in Green Pines College.
I am a senior student at Prince hall schools. I have been study hard and I hope I will graduate with high degree. I would like to continue my studying on Green Pines College after my graduated. Unfortunately, I have some financial problems, so I need some help to solve this problem.
The Information I would like to know include the following:
1-How much kind of scholarships or other financial helps is available?.
2- What conditions I should have, to be qualified to receive a...
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I would like to continue my studying on Green Pines College after my graduated.
Suggestion: I would like to continue my studying on Green Pines College after my graduation.
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