You have recently move to a different house.
Write a letter to an English speaking friend. In you letter
Explain why you have moved
Describe the new house
Invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Sue,
I hope this letter finds you in a pink of health and happiness. I write to you to let you know that we have moved into a new house in Mosman, Sydney. Since the time our second baby, Inaya has arrived, we felt the need for a bigger house for both the children to grow up in.
The present house is a noce four bedroom single unit, so each of us have a room for ourselves. It also has a huge backyard, enough for kids to play and for me to a small vegetable garden. My favorite part of the house is a big study room, which has enough room to accommodate all my books. I am sure, you will ...
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