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The chart below shows information about the challenges people face when they go to live in other countries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words.
The chart presents information about the challenges to people who try to adapt themself when they go to live in other countries. It illustrates by divided sample groups into three age periods that are 18-34, 35-54, and over 55 years old. In each group shows percentage of three factors: studying local language, finding accommodation, and finding new friends.
In overview, the chart illustrates two groups of factors: the group of factor challenges old people more than young people, and the group challenges young people more than old people. For the former trend, only 29 percent of people who are between 18-34 years old feel learning local language is a trouble. Whilst, people with 35-54, and over 55 years old concern this point more with 35 and 54 percent, respectively.
Regarding the factors which people with more age concern it less, people between 18-34, and 35-54 years old feel it hard to find place for living approximately 40 percent. This number decrease almost doubled to 22 percent when survey in people older than 54 years old. In the same way, making new friends with foreigners is hardest for the youngest sample group (46 percent), and also people who are between 35-54 years old (36 percent). However, there are only 23 percent of people in the oldest sample group point out this problem.
Noticeable, the information indicates that if compare amount percentage of every factors in each sample age group, we can see that people feel easier to adapt themself to new country when they become older.
Sentence: Noticeable, the information indicates that if compare amount percentage of every factors in each sample age group, we can see that people feel easier to adapt themself to new country when they become older.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to if and compare
Sentence: The chart presents information about the challenges to people who try to adapt themself when they go to live in other countries.
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Sentence: Noticeable, the information indicates that if compare amount percentage of every factors in each sample age group, we can see that people feel easier to adapt themself to new country when they become older.
Error: themself Suggestion: No alternate word
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 1 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 2 2
No. of Sentences: 11 10
No. of Words: 255 200
No. of Characters: 1230 1000
No. of Different Words: 125 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.996 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.824 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.326 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 56 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 27 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 17 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 23.182 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.906 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.364 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.456 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.649 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.164 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4