Young people are encouraged to travel or work for one year after high school and before university studies. Do you think that is a good idea to do so?
Nowadays, that is one of the most frequent and outstanding questions among those, who are too close to finish high school and decide on their next step forward the future life and career as well. Most common alternatives are whether to travel and work, or to continue on studies.
In my opinion, both issues are noteworthy, but it is in high priority to watch the basic needs and requirements of one’s career and profession aspirations. The higher the expectation, the more attractive becomes the motivation and need on moving forward the degree. The other alternatives, like working or travell...
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