The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.
The bar graphs elucidate the information about how many people visited New York City through three major airports, from 1995 to 2000.
Initially, about 35 millions of people have visited La Guardia airport when they visited New York. It was the most popular airport in 1995. The next highest travellers recorded as John F, Kennedy airport at almost 30 millions, which is followed closely. The least airport chosen to visit was Newark. Between 1998 and 1999, travellers visiting John F. Kennedy airport dropped to around 32 millions to reach at the lowest points. At the last year, this figure grew slightly to 44 millions. In contrast, La Guardia showed the steady increment until after 1999, it had the most number of visitors of nearly 70 millions as it reached its peak.
It is apparent that, the overall number of foreign travellers travelled to New York through John F. Kennedy airports fluctuated over 5 years while the other two airports increased in the number of visitors. By 2000, the most popular airport was La Guardia.
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Some years are ignored. Like in 1996, 1997
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