The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The charts below give information on the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts give the information about the ages of the populations of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.

In 2000, Yemen was mainly dominated by 0-14 years age group with more than half but in 2050 this scenario is expected to change with the domination by 15-59 years group with 57.3%. The total population of age group 60+ was significantly low in Yemen in 2000 with only 3.6% and same minority is expected in 2050 with marginal rise to 5.7%.

In Italy, the domination was mainly by 15-59 years age group with 61.6% in 2000 but in 2050 it is expected to decline to 46.2%, however, this age group is still expected to be majority. Unlike Yemen, 60+ age group was considerably higher in number in 2000 with 24.1% and surprisingly this figure is expected to rise dramatically to reach 42.3% in 2050. Unexpectedly, 0-14 years age group was minority in Italy in 2000 with just 14.3% and same is expected in 2050 with even lower figure of 11.5%.

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