The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Sumarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts depict information about the four various activities among the United Kingdom graduate and postgraduate students who did not have full-time employment after their graduation in 2008.
The majority of graduate students decided to continue their education at the University. Also, the number of further study students was much higher than those who decided to do voluntary work. By contrast, the number of further study students was 29665 while voluntary work students were just 3500. In the meantime, the number of graduate students decided to do part-time work and those who remained unemployed were similar at 17735 and 16235 respectively.
Meanwhile, the number of postgraduate students, which were about 2535, preferred to do part-time work, whereas the number of unemployed students was 1625. Also, there were just 345 students who did voluntary work. Besides that, a lot of postgraduate students decided to take further study.
As is illustrated in the chart, overall, most students opted for further studies, while a few went for voluntary works.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 167.0 196.424390244 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44910179641 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72626780147 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 106.607317073 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544910179641 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.8966983584 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.111111111 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5555555556 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232715629579 0.215688989381 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11128788129 0.103423049105 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0764792298764 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159166980431 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924418654692 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 11.4140731707 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.