A company is recruiting some workers. Write a letter for application.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the Ad published in “Hindu” newspaper on 25th July.
I have done Bachelor degree in electronics and currently working as an associate engineer for an electronics company. In the current role, my responsibilities are designing a chip plate on a white bread, analysing the impact of this on other components, writing test cases with results. Recently, I had completed certification in one of the key responsibility area i.e., designing a chip on white bread.
With this qualification and experience, I am meeting all the company prerequisites mentioned in the Ad. Please find attached resume along with this mail for your reference and request you to send me a copy of application form to apply for the position in your company.
You can send me email (sss.a@gmail.com) or Fax : 333333 or Post to the copy of the application form to following address : Plot No:44,Road No:III,Nets worth avenue,Cansda.
Yours Sincerely,
Jack
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter with reference to the advertisement published in the Hindu newspaper on 25th July 2014.
I have a Bachelors degree in Electronics and am currently working as an Associate Engineer for an electronics company. In the current role, my responsibilities include to the following
• Designing a chip plate on a white bread
• Analyzing the impact of this on other components
• Writing test cases and their results.
Recently, I completed certification course in one of the core areas of my job profile i.e., designing a chip on a white bread.
With this qualification and experience, I am meeting all the prerequisites listed in your advertisement. Please find attached my resume along with this mail for your reference. I request you to send me a copy of application form to apply for the discussed requirement in your company.
You mail me at sss.a@gmail.comor post a hard copy of the application form to below mentioned address
Plot No.: 44, Road No.III,Netsworth Avenue,Canada,A7UI.
Yours Sincerely,
Jack
Sentence: In the current role, my responsibilities are designing a chip plate on a white bread, analysing the impact of this on other components, writing test cases with results.
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