The Comparison between USA and Japan in spending money on apparel between 1999 and 2003

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The Comparison between USA and Japan in spending money on apparel between 1999 and 2003

The graph depicts the comparison of spending money on apparel on the internet between USA and Japan in 1999 to 2003. It can be clearly seen that both countries encountered a wave and eventually went up significantly.

A glance at Japan, this nation started twice as much as USA, about 10 million dollars spending money on apparel in 1999. Japan continued going up slightly at approximately 12 in the next year, before plunged by roughly 6 between the year 2001 and 2002.
However, the progression increased dramatically to 18 million dollars in the middle of the year 2002 – 2003. In 2003, Japan peaked at 20.

On the other hand, USA commenced at 5 million dollars in 1999, and similarly increased gradually at 10 in the following year. USA almost met at the same point as Japan between 2001 and 2002 at around 7, and again, this nation rose significantly to 19. Finally, USA peaked at the same as Japan in 2003 about 20 million dollars.

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