The diagram below gives information about the number of parcels delivered by two major mail services companies from 1920 to 2000.
The line graph illustrates information about the number of parcels delivered by FedEx and TNT in over 80 years and is measured in the number of parcels delivery.
Overall, it can be seen that the figure has different measures. While FedEx and TNT showed a gradual increase, the number of parcels delivered mail service by TNT had more significant than that of FedEx.
In 1920, the number of parcels delivered by TNT stood at approximately 5.500. However, over the following years, the number then rose gradually from 1930 to 1950 to approximately 8.000. From 1950 to 1960, there was a gradual increase to 12.000. 1960 to 2.000 and witnessed a dramatic growth to 24000.
Moving to a more detailed analysis, during 1920 the number of parcels delivered by FedEx stood at 15.000. Then, there was a significant rise from 1920 to 1940 to approximately 24.000. But then increased significantly to 1950 to approximately 13.000. However, between 1950 to 1960, the figure remained constant to 13.000. In contrast, there was a dramatic growth between 1960 and 1980 to approximately 18.000. Then, during the period 1980 to 2000, this evened out at 18.000
the number of parcels delivered mail service by TNT had more significant than that of FedEx.
the number of parcels delivered by TNT is more significant than that of FedEx.
1960 to 2.000 and witnessed a dramatic growth to 24000.
it witnessed a dramatic growth to 24000 from 1960 to 2000
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'But then increased significantly to 1950 to approximately 13.000'???
It should be decreased in this period.
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