The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

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The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the-minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecasts.

Given is a diagram explicating the procedure by which momentary data is accumulated by the Australian Bureau of Meteorology to generate reputable prognosis on upcoming weather conditions. Four principal phases are entailed starting from amassing information, and closing up with its scattering amid people.

Afore all, it is apparent that first stage of gathering data is subdivided into three different ways, namely through satellite, radar and drifting buoy. "Analysis and forecasting" step ensues, that converts data sent form three distinct sources into satellite photo, radar screed and synoptic chart. As follows, all actuarial records are processed and transmuted into a diverse format to make data convenient for broadcasting. Eventually, processed data is ready to be transmitted via three distinct medai modes: TV, radio and recording device.

Interestingly, data from satellite and drifting buoy is co via radar to be analyzed and then resent to the next stage as radar screen.

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it is apparent that first stage of gathering data is
it is apparent that the first stage of gathering data is

"Analysis and forecasting" step ensues, that converts data sent form three distinct sources into satellite photo, radar screed and synoptic chart
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Sentence: Eventually, processed data is ready to be transmitted via three distinct medai modes: TV, radio and recording device.
Error: medai Suggestion: media

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