The diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows the production of steam using a gas cooled nuclear reactor.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates the process of producing steam employing a gas-cooled nuclear reactor. This system includes a reactor and heat exchanger.

As regards the structure of the system, the pressure vessels, which wrap around all remaining parts of the system, is located inside the concrete radiation shielding. The uranium fuel elements are placed in the graphite moderators. These moderators are linked with the boron control rods and gone through charge tubes for loading fuel elements. As another main component of the system, the heat exchanger consists of a pipe that leads water into the chamber and the chamber itself where is exchanged between gas and water.

In terms of the operation of the system, the steam is produced in a closed cycle. The cool gas dust is blown into the reactor by the gas blower. This gas is heated to a certain degree thanks to the nuclear reactor then it is to flow back into the heat exchanger via hot gas dust. In the chamber, the hot gas is traded off its heat with the cool gas to become cooler. At the same time, the cool water is converted into steam which is to power the turbo- alternator. The cool gas that enters the reactor to start the next cycle.

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Average: 7.8 (16 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 185, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean '(thanks)'?
Suggestion: (thanks)
... This gas is heated to a certain degree thanks to the nuclear reactor then it is to fl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, as regards, as to

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 998.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 210.0 196.424390244 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75238095238 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37696809492 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542857142857 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.0 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.7142571657 43.030603864 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.1666666667 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207476576421 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876629417575 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793270491084 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158700329427 0.15604864568 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833559951629 0.0819641961636 102% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 40.7170731707 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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