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The table we are given illustrates some statistics about the railroad systems of London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington, Kyoto and Los Angeles.
To begin with, the first railway was introduced to the inhabitants of London for travelling nearly one and a half century ago (1863) and now with 394 km its length outcompetes the railroad systems of the shown cities. In contrast to this, the number of citizens using London railways is much few compared to Paris” and Tokyo” being 775, 1191 and 1927 millions a year respectively.
On the other hand, among these cities the shortest road belongs to Kyoto, at 11 km, where is visited least , at 45 million which is 5 point less than Los Angeles”s that is the youngest by starting to carry passengers 25 years before Washington DC”.
Overall, because of the growing population and prices in developed countries citizens have to prefer alternatives such as railway to air and sea transport and consequently, this fact leads to increase the importance of railroad.
Sentence: To begin with, the first railway was introduced to the inhabitants of London for travelling nearly one and a half century ago 1863 and now with 394 km its length outcompetes the railroad systems of the shown cities.
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