The bar graph gives information the amount of water usage with cubic meter by industries in some country. The general view is that Chemicals are peak at highest point with 430 in ground water, while the least usage is shown in Textiles and Fuel for Public supply, which are only 10.
To specify, Both Fuel and Textiles have approximately near numbers ( 70 and 80 respectively ) in ground water, which are just under in Machinery and Mental industries for Public supply (100 and 90 in turn). To be more prices, when Food/drinks show 100 of cubic meters to ground water, there is Public supply which more than by 80.
On the contrary, Mental and Chemicals are revealed just opposite both trends ground water and public supply, which are 240 for the former and the latter, while metal tent to as less as five times than the latter trend.
To sum up, despite public supply industries have the similar point with ground water, It is likely used less than ground water in some country.
The bar graph gives information the amount of water usage
The bar graph gives information about the amount of water usage
there is Public supply which more than by 80.
there is Public supply which is more than by 80.
are revealed just opposite both trends ground water and public supply,
are revealed just opposite trends on ground water and public supply both,
while metal tent to as less as five times than the latter trend.
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despite public supply industries have the similar point
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