The graph below shows the percentage change in the nubmer of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.-alam-(re-write)

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The graph below shows the percentage change in the nubmer of international students graduating from universities in different Canadian provinces between 2001 and 2006.-alam-(re-write)

Given is the bart chart reveals how many international student graduated from several universities in some Canadian regions during a period of 6 years, from 2001 to 2006.

Overall, based on the data, in 2001, the numbers of international pupils who completed studies varied between 3 and 5 percent. Interestingly, all universities experienced valuable increasing in 2006 which varied from just over 4 percent to 5 percent excluding Alberta which decreased.

A more detailed look at the graph illustrates no province could break the record of New Brunswick that was approximately 7 percent at the beginning and nearly 12 percent at the end of the period. In 2001, Nova Scotia which was at the second highest position graduated around 6.5 percent international students followed by Quebec, Alberta, British Columbia, Manitoba, Newfoundland and Labrador, and Ontario that was the last position with only 3 percent.

Having been presented in the graph, in 2006, while most colleges competed each other to be at the highest rate in term of international graduates, Alberta experienced a significant decrease from just under 6 to 4.5 percent.

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