The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day between October and December 1992. Summarize information by selecting and reporting main features and make comparison when relevant.
The above diagram illustrates audiences of two popular media – radio and television in the UK, between October and December, 1992.
The audiences of television is low in the early morning, that rises to about 5% at 08:00 am, followed by a gentle drop at 11:00 am, to rise again reaching approximately 15% at 01:00 pm in the afternoon. The audiences of television is then soaring steeply to reach the maximum proportion of about 50% at 08:00 pm (the prime time of watching television), followed by a sharp fall to a minimum 1% at 12:00 midnight. Then the proportion of audiences remains same overnight, only to rise again in the early morning.
The audiences of radio is quite different than those of television. It is about 5% at 06:00 am early morning, which shows a sharp surge to reach to about 28% at 08:00 am (the highest proportion of audiences in a day). Then it falls rapidly, and reaches to about 10% at 04:00 pm and after 12:00 midnight, there is no audiences of radio observed.
Thus, there is a wide variation in the audiences of radio and television with respect to time. And television is found to be more popular than radio.
illustrates audiences of two popular media
illustrates the audiences of two popular media
The audiences of television is low in the early morning
The audiences ...are low in the early morning
The audiences of television is low in the early morning, that rises to about 5% at 08:00 am, followed by a gentle drop at 11:00 am, to rise again reaching approximately 15% at 01:00 pm in the afternoon.
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