The graphs show below the post school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69

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The graphs show below the post school qualifications held by Australians in the age groups 25 to 34 and 55 to 69.

The two pie charts represents the post school qualifications of two groups aged 25-34 and 55-69 in which the research was held in Australia. The general overview here is that the social science and arts is the most popular subject among the two groups.

To begin with, the graph shows that, social science and arts is the highest among all the subjects with the percent of 20.42% of group aged between 55 to 69 and the group aged between 25 to 34 with 19.48%. On the contrary, architecture and medicine had a decline with younger graduates whereas architecture dropped by 1.5% and medicine dropped by 4%. However, the biggest decline with engineering from 19% to 9.36%.

On the other hand, science,maths,computers is the subject which raised with aged between 25-34. In addition, education had a minor rise with 1% and administration had a moderate growth with the percent of nearly 5%.

It is clear that, social science and arts is the demanding subject according to the post school qualifications done by Australia on two different age groups.

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The general overview here is that the social science and arts is the most popular subject among the two groups.

To begin with, the graph shows that, social science and arts is the highest among all the subjects...

It is clear that, social science and arts is the demanding subject according to the post school qualifications

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